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I don't tell him...

Elena,  le 12.05.2009

He says I'm nice
Because when he doesn't answer, I don't call twice

He thinks I'm cool
Because I let him be free, don't act a fool

He says he wants me to stay the way I am
Then maybe, one day, he'll be my biggest fan

He says one day we will be ok
If I just hang around and stay


So I don't tell him what he really does to me
I tell him we can just hang out, we'll see...

So I don't tell him I really want him here
Just hold him close to take away his fear

So I don't tell him he knocks me off my feet
I tell him his soft kisses are just so sweet

So I don't tell him I want him to spend the night
Body to body, discover each other till the night turns bright


But what if he makes me wait too long?
What if by the time he'll be ready?
I'll be gone...

 

Commentaires

Severine, 12.05.09, 21:55:10
This is really good! I know what it is, you will get through this for sure!
Kris Fondation Mundele, 12.05.09, 9:29:54
As I am half english, I'm touched by the language of Shakespeare...
Elena you have the sense of poetry!
Very nice text!
N., 12.05.09, 8:46:08
I never wanted to post any comments here, but this time I just had to. I feel you, girl. I've been through the same and it still hurts. Don't make the same mistake and waste too much time of your life on an adventure that won't turn into something real. Take care.
Tine, 12.05.09, 8:15:33
I think that every woman who reads this poem will understand completely what Elena is trying to say to his guy...
If it hurts you too much girl, don't stay around! Go, wander away, you never know what lies on your path. And maybe, just maybe, this guy gets his act together and realizes what he's about to lose!
Nice debut, girl, proud of you!!!

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